Emotions in Portraits
Portraits need emotions. Even portraits in fashion photography. Emotion in the person, and emotion in the way of picturing the person.
That girl in the picture is definitely not in a relaxed mood and is all wired up. She was moody and aggressive and it gave the photo its energy.
I supported the emotion from my end by shooting it at a peak emotion and made sure the eyes were the focus of the picture, which I supported again in the post production and in the alteration of the background to support the emotional energy of this portrait.